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I have an upcoming assessment which is based on how the character of Romeo is presented and I have good comprehension and analysis of some quotes. However, my main quote is ‘O’ brawling love’ but I need help with some in depth analysis of the quote like the use of vowels in ‘brawling’ in order for me to reach grade 8’s and 9’s.
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i didn't do romeo and juliet but you may find this useful?:dontknow: http://reyeseng.org/files/romeo-and-juliet-LitChart.pdf
worth checking quizlet for romeo and juliet quotes with commentary
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Vowels? The f*ck you smoking boi? I achieved a strong nine without using analysis that deep. Anyway, what awarding body is this for?
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Lol Thankyou and what did you incorporate in order to achieve a nine?
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Lol Thankyou and what did you incorporate in order to achieve a nine?
I understood which AOs each question in each paper was targeting, and I centred my essay structure around that. I used very simple subject terminology, but my analysis was deep and innovative enough to achieve the top marks. I was with Edexcel.
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What quotes did you talk about and do you have any analysis for any quotes.
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What quotes did you talk about and do you have any analysis for any quotes.
The exams were a while ago, so I don't really remember lol. This also depends on what kind of analysis you're talking about. I had an excerpt from the play with quotes that I applied AO2 analysis to, and other quotes in which I used AOs 1 and 3 for my analysis.

Also, you should learn how to use the reply button on this site (or the app). I may not see your next reply.
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The exams were a while ago, so I don't really remember lol. This also depends on what kind of analysis you're talking about. I had an excerpt from the play with quotes that I applied AO2 analysis to, and other quotes in which I used AOs 1 and 3 for my analysis.

Also, you should learn how to use the reply button on this site (or the app). I may not see your next reply.
My assessment is based on how Romeo is presented and is intending on using the quote O’ brawling love and I have analysed it good but is there anything else I could talk about regarding the quotation.
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My assessment is based on how Romeo is presented and is intending on using the quote O’ brawling love and I have analysed it good but is there anything else I could talk about regarding the quotation.
First, tell me everything that you have about the quotation.
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First, tell me everything that you have about the quotation.
I have analysed the fact that it demonstrates love is always accompanied with conflict. The Apostroph reveals his excessive emotions. The vowels in the quotation. The effect of the o sound.
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