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teacher told me my higher english essay to right wing to to accepted and that the sqa markers would not mark it because of that. annoying that the sqa is infected with libtards smh. i attached my essay if you want to read it to see it's not too controversial.
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(Original post by aimware)
teacher told me my higher english essay to right wing to to accepted and that the sqa markers would not mark it because of that. annoying that the sqa is infected with libtards smh. i attached my essay if you want to read it to see it's not too controversial.
Are you going to complain and insist its submitted anyway? Courage of your convictions?
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teacher told me my higher english essay to right wing to to accepted and that the sqa markers would not mark it because of that. annoying that the sqa is infected with libtards smh. i attached my essay if you want to read it to see it's not too controversial.
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Are you going to complain and insist its submitted anyway? Courage of your convictions?
no i have to think of some other **** to write about
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you mean the file i attached if so it's a file not a link
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you mean the file i attached if so it's a file not a link
You sound really immature and annoying. God knows what your essay must sound like.
I’d say, take your teachers advice and re-write it. And remember I’s should be capital.

Good luck.
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It's not right-wing, but borderline racist. You're entitled to follow or believe what you like, but there are standards - not driven by PC culture. When you make the rules you can push your own agenda.

Typical really to be pushing these "facts". I see you used "libtard" clearly in with that American new political crowd *yawn*.
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(Original post by hannah60000)
It's not right-wing, but borderline racist. You're entitled to follow or believe what you like, but there are standards - not driven by PC culture. When you make the rules you can push your own agenda.

Typical really to be pushing these "facts". I see you used "libtard" clearly in with that American new political crowd *yawn*.
Thank you for taking one for the team and reading it. Have some rep.
Examiners tend to not take too kindly to racist material and would sanction the candidate.
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It’s racist, that’s the issue. Your teacher seems too uncomfortable to admit it, your political views shouldn’t make a difference to an exam board but discrimination does. You also sound arrogant. Don’t post here if you can’t answer basic questions.
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The arguments are bad but it's just truly atrociously written...
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It’s racist, that’s the issue. Your teacher seems too uncomfortable to admit it, your political views shouldn’t make a difference to an exam board but discrimination does. You also sound arrogant. Don’t post here if you can’t answer basic questions.
you say its racist but everything i say is backed up with facts and logic and i say in the conclusion that it is silly to took at race and IQ because iQ scores are constantly changing if you even bothered to read my essay
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you say its racist but everything i say is backed up with facts and logic and i say in the conclusion that it is silly to took at race and IQ because iQ scores are constantly changing if you even bothered to read my essay
Again, don’t post here if you’re too sensitive or unwilling to accept people’s comments.
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You sound really immature and annoying. God knows what your essay must sound like.
I’d say, take your teachers advise and re-write it. And remember I’s should be capital.

Good luck.
you sound like a real human bean
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you say its racist but everything i say is backed up with facts and logic and i say in the conclusion that it is silly to took at race and IQ because iQ scores are constantly changing if you even bothered to read my essay
If you think it is of such a high quality then get your parents involved and insist it is submitted.
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Not sure if it’s a good thing that my iPad won’t load the file - I kind of want to read it, i need a good laugh right now.
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Just some general constructive criticism too.....9 paragraphs (main body) is a lot. One of your paragraphs for an argument is literally one sentence long?
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Regardless of content, it is a badly written piece with numerous errors of grammar, spelling, style, and logic.
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If you think it is of such a high quality then get your parents involved and insist it is submitted.
i dont think its of high quality english writing far from it but i think they should not reject essays because it's a controversial topic or opinion as those are the most interesting to read about and research e.g. africans have smaller brains than asians who would have thought? and because it would be rejected i am thinking of a different essay to write about.
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(Original post by aimware)
i dont think its of high quality english writing far from it but i think they should not reject essays because it's a controversial topic or opinion as those are the most interesting to read about and research e.g. africans have smaller brains than asians who would have thought? and because it would be rejected i am thinking of a different essay to write about.
You should try reading the exam rules for SQA and then argue for change. Have fun with that. Get the mark you deserve.
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(Original post by gjd800)
Regardless of content, it is a badly written piece with numerous errors of grammar, spelling, style, and logic.
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