Original post by greenteascratchyMmhm, I'm a bit more nervous about the end of the syllabus because our teacher kinda rushed it at the end and we haven't discussed it in as much detail as things like the October Rev. or Five Year Plans etc.
I don't have any essay plans that have been checked over by my teacher (I have tried looking online but little success) but I can tell you what I would do for them in ultra basic paragraphs, (they obviously may not be correct because I'm not a teacher but)
1) (Soviet Bloc due to paranoia) Overall I would agree (as the name 'buffer states' suggests, it was predominantly security) because
a) Stalin's past obsession with paranoia, his suspicion of the West,
b) BUT, concerned less with international security and more on spreading communism would suggest that he wasn't just scared, plus some of the bloc countries created communist governments without his intervention
c) however, yes I agree that he was 'paranoid' but it was justified paranoia (challenge the question) e.g. the number of times Russia has been invaded in the past, Marshall Aid etc. from the states which he was afraid of
That was probably awful and tbf it has turned up once before- I'm sure if you typed the question into google the markscheme with content would pop up.
2) By 1953 the USSR had become a world power: This depends on how you define a 'world power', as in terms of military and political influences it was, e.g. nuclear bomb, being involved with France, Britain, the 'Big Three' and United Nations. However, in terms of economy/social aspects you could argue it wasn't, or the road to reach its power had a tremendous cost that suggests the USSR was vulnerable. However, perhaps the only things that make a world power are military/industrial/diplomatic and the quality of life of the population wasn't important. Also, attack the phrase 'world power' because it doesn't quite mean super power. USSR was a world power but now superpower or something like that
3) The signing of the Nazi-Soviet Pact in 1939 reflected the total failure of Stalin's foreign policy attack the use of the word 'total'
a) it was a failure because Stalin was naive, failed to accept that Germany would turn her back on Russia in Operation Barbarossa, Stalin should have seen the signs (e.g. Mein Kampf being written 1925)
b) yes because Stalin fell out with Britain and France after the 'Collective Security' alliance, and therefore he was forced into signing because he had no other allies shows weakness in international negotiation that he has to join with his enemy political ideology
c) but, the word 'total' is too extreme, Nazis and Soviets actually were on good terms from the peace treaty signed (Treaty of Rapallo) and even during Lenin's time they were on alright terms, plus, it was a mutual treaty so Stalin got the borders pre-Treaty of Brest Litovsk, he received lots of german goods and it did work for a while... however, the fact that they betrayed him still indicates that his policy was not perfect, it represented his weak international relations but it wasn't completely out of the blue, it did make sense at the time
4) To what extent does Stalin deserve the title 'The Great War Hero' is quite nice and straight forward I think, I just think you have to make the point that what the people at the time perceived him as (being a hero) isn't necessarily true, you have to have some skepticism
a) yes, he did many things well done, even made speeches which were rare, managed to stir up Russian patriotism, stayed in Moscow despite it being in danger etc. and he surprised everyone (even himself) about Russia's success
b) but, it wasn't an easy ride, the 'hero' part is probably propaganda as his misguided view on the Nazi invasion (not believing they had invaded etc) implies that he wasn't great, he actually made things worse occassionally e.g. the refusal to retreat at Kharkov which cost 85,000 lives in 1943 plus his oerly harsh treatment of the military, however, unlike Hitler he learned from his mistakes which was extremely important, and he made concessions such as re-opening churches and creating organisations such as GKO
c) on balance, whilst he did well, other factors also played a part which meant yes he was successful but 'hero' is stretching it, e.g. Russian geography, weather, Yugoslavia being harder to beat than expected by Hitler etc.
Afraid I've ran out of juice because I need to go take a shower, but I hope this somehow helps? If you also had any essay plans for any of the questions I would appreciate if you could share too, or improve my ones! Cheers