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Hi I'm just looking for some help with English Lang Paper 2 Question 2 if anyone could read this and tell me what mark i would get and how i could improve please do:

Both extracts explain the chaotic environments of a festival/fair however source a describes the chaotic and “terrible” weather which affects the festival, whereas source B talk about the “perpetual bustle” due to overcrowding of people. Source A scene is described to be “covered in… slippery… dark brown mud”, whereas source b is described to be “crowded with people smoking and drinking”. In source A the author juxtaposes the ideas as the weather suggest the festival goers would be having an awful time but “bizarrely” everyone seems to be having a “brilliant time” with”broad grins” everywhere. In contrast the chaotic environment in Source B it states that “everyone is anxious” due to the chaos and “bustle”.

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