Dying Shore Watch

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For a brief moment it felt like it was God’s will that we’ve crossed sights.
Your deep blue eyes, two loaded bullets firing towards mine, dark and lifeless.
But how can my eyes meet another’s when your gaze hides their death,
The blindness buried underneath, and the uncertainty that comes with it?
They shut and blink away the truth, like a clock ticking without a craftsman.
If only you knew...
All I feel through this carousel of laughter is nothing but sorrow, silenced by your voice echoing through my head.
The sound of it, caressing my ears like wild waves getting closer to the shore, then violently dissipating into the sand.
If only you knew...
Days go on forever yet time is caged, frozen like my cold soul melting during this war.
The first hello and the last goodbye are both naturally tender, in different yet similar fragile ways.
Ways to surrender to the storm, the wind, the rain and everything else you bring along to finally go for the kill.
And here I am, waiting for my light to go off.
The pain still there, but that aching pulse no more.
If only I knew, perhaps you’d do too.
I turned my back, you did the same.
Love still does burn, when fire has no flame.
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Whats up with you and the sad poems lately. Are you feeling okay burrito?
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whos this about is tho
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*who is this about tho
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Whats up with you and the sad poems lately. Are you feeling okay burrito?
Feeling more than okay yeh
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whos this about is tho
A real human being and a real hero

You wouldn't know her I'm fairly certain
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i think i cheated on her with you
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Feeling more than okay yeh
Are you sure? You can pm me if you want to talk.
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i think i cheated on her with you
That's kinda deep when you think about it lol

Up for a threesome?
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Are you sure? You can pm me if you want to talk.
How can I pm you when you're anon...
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im straight
nd did she cheat on u
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That's kinda deep when you think about it lol

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im straight
nd did she cheat on u
So am I

Nah man, nothing like that
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so why did u leave her
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So am I

Nah man, nothing like that
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Tfw this thread is all anons lmao
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so why did u leave her
Who says I did
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did she leave u then
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Who says I did
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did she leave u then
Who said that either

You have to read the poem again. Gotta think about it
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too deep, did u leave eachother
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Who said that either

You have to read the poem again. Gotta think about it
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too deep, did u leave eachother
No lol. It's very complicated.

Just interpret the words how you want to, that's the beauty of poetry
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How can I pm you when you're anon...
yes sorry I can pm you instead if you want?
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