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So i want to volunteer at this therapy clinic and i'm not sure if this email is good. Is there any improvements i can make?

"To The Northwood Speech & Language Therapy Practice,

My name is ** and I am writing to enquire Volunteering/Work experience/ Work Shadowing during this summer.
I am currently a year 12 student in my first year at ** and i am studying Biology, Product design and Business. I have a huge interest in speech and language therapy and i aspire to be to study Speech and language therapy at University.

Last year i volunteered in a user-led charity (Disablement Association Hillingdon) and this sparked my interest in therapy. I would like gain further insight into speech and language therapy.

I am certain that I can learn a great deal working with you and that doing so will assist me in developing my skills as a therapist, and will
definitely help me to further comprehend the great deal of work and effort that occurs within. I am also happy being given tasks then left to work under my own initiative where required.

Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
*name*"
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Hiya- you might want to get rid of ur name and school on this website as god-knows who will see it
(Original post by AbiAbi_Abi)
So i want to volunteer at this therapy clinic and i'm not sure if this email is good. Is there any improvements i can make?

"To The Northwood Speech & Language Therapy Practice,

My name is ** and I am writing to enquire Volunteering/Work experience/ Work Shadowing during this summer.
I am currently a year 12 student in my first year at ** and i am studying Biology, Product design and Business. I have a huge interest in speech and language therapy and i aspire to be to study Speech and language therapy at University.

Last year i volunteered in a user-led charity (Disablement Association Hillingdon) and this sparked my interest in therapy. I would like gain further insight into speech and language therapy.

I am certain that I can learn a great deal working with you and that doing so will assist me in developing my skills as a therapist, and will
definitely help me to further comprehend the great deal of work and effort that occurs within. I am also happy being given tasks then left to work under my own initiative where required.

Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
*name*"
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But also-I think the email is great-goodluck
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Ah yes i just edited it, can you still see it?
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Hiya- you might want to get rid of ur name and school on this website as god-knows who will see it
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Nope-it's gone
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Ah yes i just edited it, can you still see it?
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Thank youuuu
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But also-I think the email is great-goodluck
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Good email. If you could get the name of a person to send it to it would be more personal and easier to follow up.
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Oh right yes thank you so much.
(Original post by Zarek)
Good email. If you could get the name of a person to send it to it would be more personal and easier to follow up.
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