I just finished my 3 poems for history (these poems are based on ww1)
so i want to hear what you think of the last poem i wrote (you will cringe):
Where is my son <--title
The war has ended,
and other countries` armies bonds had mended,
i have not seen my son,
but i hop he did not die by a bomb or gun,
i thought of him so often that tears went down to my cheek,
and my mood became very bad that week,
he would light up my darkness,
his soul was filled with gracefulness,
i sat on the hill on what the weather seemed to be like a red coloured sunset,
comprehending the thought that my son was not dead.
AND I DO NOT HAVE A SON --> just in case if you think i do
do i need to edit this in any way? if yes, what?