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Hello.
It would be kind of someone of reading my Report Writing for the ESL Exam.
I've written but there is no one to examine it.
Original post by abdullahAK
Hello.
It would be kind of someone of reading my Report Writing for the ESL Exam.
I've written but there is no one to examine it.


I am a proofreader, I could do that for you.
Reply 2
Thanks, Michelle it's so kind of you.
The recycle snip contains the question.
The word file is my report.
If you would not mind please rate it on a scale 1-10.
Reply 3
Hi,
Ms. Michelle did you read my report.?
Bye!
Original post by abdullahAK
Thanks, Michelle it's so kind of you.
The recycle snip contains the question.
The word file is my report.
If you would not mind please rate it on a scale 1-10.


Hello Abdullah,

May I ask your level of study? Are you a college student, a university student or a school student? I have found many spelling errors on your report and I did fix them. On your 1st sentence there's something which is unclear to me where the sentence ends by 'without English'.
Remember you need write in passive voice when you write a report. You need to rearrange and fix this. Do in this way;

Begin with the
1) Introduction- Do an introduction of your given topic
2)Body paragraphs- Support the main idea, make points, give reasons, give evidence etc
3)Conclusion- Write your opinion, say what could be fixed, give recommendations if you have.

I did fix some and add some advance synonyms. I will attach it down below but you must arrange paragraphs. Your original work needed so much change, I would have given a 4/10. I did my best to help you, hope this works, have a look on the attached document. Good luck!
Reply 5
Thank You.
I'm a High School Student.
For the report writing, our English teacher provided us with a format.
I wrote the report according to it.
Reply 6
I know you would not have time for it, but can you have a look at my argumentative article.:tongue:

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