But I will also just paste what I said here. I have attached a bank of quotations I made for Handmaid's tale- if you want one for Frankenstein I can attach it as well
If you have any further questions just ask, I'll be more than happy to help.
Which exam board are you? mine is Edexcel
with literature, there isn't a specific structure to follow just hit all the points in the mark scheme. you need to develop your own style. But in comparison essays its rly important to have an integrated comparison meaning to try and compare throughout. so even if you have one para for one novel and second para for the other novel, in each of those paragraphs try to mention the other novel also at the start of the next paragraph summarise your previous point.
I'm attaching a redrafted essay I have done in my mock in which I got a B but the teacher told me that he marked it rly harshly and it's worth an A, and I'm sure with the redraft I did it might get an A*.