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Question 5) Your school is making a creative writing anthology that will be sold to other pupils. You have decided to submit a piece of writing.
Write the opening part of story about a trip to the beach. [40 marks]
Everything was silent and you can just hear the birds sound. At that time I was just relaxing on the beach having a peaceful nap. Just for a moment the weather totally changed and the waves of the air were slamming my face hardly. It was very potent that I couldn’t open my bewitching eyes. I was chaos from the weather, how it is changed from spectacular to gloomy weather.
Suddenly, someone gave me his hand to stand up, at that time I had a exalted and strange feeling, I couldn’t explain it. I was staring at him, he had an angelic face exactly like an angel, who came and saved my life. He had black hair, delicate skin and china-blue eyes with a lot of light in them. Come on, let’s go quickly he screamed, so I woke up from what I was thinking and I was running to avoid the sea wave from hitting me. I turned back to see the boy, he had disappear, I don’t have any idea where did he go. I left the deserted beach, searching for any sign of my angelic boy.
I was walking toward insular place that everything where silent and the darkness encapsulated the light, blanketing any sense of hope. I was overwhelmed with anxiety and terrifying thoughts of what I will find there, and I could feel my hands begin to tremble. There were an alluring rocks and behind those rocks I saw something like a human hand but I wasn’t sure until I reached closer to the rocks, shocking shocking I saw something unbelievable that the angelic boy dead. I started to hear voices calling by name telling me wake up it time to go back home.