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Dancing upon a lake,
Feet drowning,
Quick at a pace;
But look at what’s hidden,
Behind those shoes of grace,
As they dance ballet.

Silk pink cloth,
It shimmers,
In the night hours;
And the shades of blue,
Is where we’ll hide,
From all judge mental eyes,
But drown along the way.

Heartbeats loud,
Together in sync,
Grace in our movements,
As we float above the lake,
Let your heart race,
And take our request,
To join this dance,
Of ballet.
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They played,
As the flower,
Drifted away;
Nobody noticed,
As the harsh winds,
Forced it, to let go,
It fought,
Till it’s last bread,
But it couldn’t make it.

It flew away,
With the wind and dust;
And If it could just,
Give out,
One last call,
One last scream;
Take in,
One last defeat.

But the world’s been deaf;
Nothing’s left,
As the wind gushed past,
They turned a blind eye
To which,
They claimed to love.

They saved the drowning,
Ignored, those falling;
Advised to let go,
Once they reached the ground,
Know you’re been drowned.
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Wish upon a fallen star,
Death, near but still so far

Fires, in rivers, it ran,
Burnt forests, with higher lifespan

Rivers, with waters, dark black
Clouded, it clashed; as it fell back

Unto fresh water,
Now, delicate seam, with slaughter

Both glistening waters, but one,
The moon and sun, has overly done
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Your touch was soft,
Like the petals upon
Your wedding gown.

Your first duty,
As a wife, you conquered,
But you didn’t know,

I was soon to arrive,
With two brothers;
That you might despise,

I sat down;
looked, upon our picture
With a frown,

I saw your smile;
It resembled mine,
Gave me a bit of life.

In the afterlife,
I hope, to the angels
Is where you’re gone;

The devil,
Is where I’ll belong;
The shadow to your light.

Your love,
A jewel; wished I cherished,
Before you would’ve perished.

I wish,
I knew of what I had,
It still drives me mad.

In my heart,
You still live,
In the deepest dives.

Till this day;
There’s no other,
That I’d proudly call, My mother.
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Runs terror through the blackest of eyes
Takes a visit under the darkest of skies
It may find it’s interest in broad day light
Those stone hearted, will tumble in fright
Smiling, it walks, charmingly down the lane
Attracts those in pain, all of his to gain
Realization sets in their brain, too late
Burning flames, charcoal fire is what awaits
If only they realized their early mistake
Death would instead taste its own stake
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Let’s go merrily down
Leave him alive
So we all can drown
The empty heart
Is his town
Play his game
And we all will drown
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The house no one sees
Surrounded by four walls
Where light doesn’t reach
The damp, cold halls
The water seeps in
Drowning it all.
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A simple task at hand
Or a game on display,
For all those spectators
Looking at the play.
Know, no part is played
In all but a simple game.
Our abusement, resulting
In your amusement.
We know,
You wouldn’t care.
You sit on your throne
High up in the air.
Know, once we arrive
On your golden grounds,
With regret-less hearts to be found.
Prideful heads, held high,
Step after steps
We’ll reach our death beds.
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