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How do I do the opening sentence for the OCR exam board?
I normally write them like:
Triple system feminists argue that social class and ethnicity are also the main causes for gender inequality in UK society today, whereas, radical feminist Dworkin argues that.....
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However, Marxists criticise the New Right and Marshland for believing that social inequality at fault of the government being too generous and argue that they fail to consider how the government is responsible ...
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I'm struggling to work out whether the example sentence you are giving are for evaluative paragraphs or supporting paragraphs, it looks pretty good regardless but just try to remember this general structure:

Introduction:
Overall introduction to argument, definition & stats, signposting of planned points (preferably in that order)

[
Supporting paragraph structure:
Type of theoretical perspective - argument - key theorists - example - apply example - summary sentence of point

Evaluative paragraph structure:
"However" (or alternative) type of theoretical perspective would instead argue... - key theorist - example - apply example - summary sentence of point
] X4

Conclusion:
Evaluate general pros and cons of essay - come to actual conclusion don't be indecisive as to what argument is correct
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(Original post by dab4jesus420)
I'm struggling to work out whether the example sentence you are giving are for evaluative paragraphs or supporting paragraphs, it looks pretty good regardless but just try to remember this general structure:

Introduction:
Overall introduction to argument, definition & stats, signposting of planned points (preferably in that order)

[
Supporting paragraph structure:
Type of theoretical perspective - argument - key theorists - example - apply example - summary sentence of point

Evaluative paragraph structure:
"However" (or alternative) type of theoretical perspective would instead argue... - key theorist - example - apply example - summary sentence of point
] X4

Conclusion:
Evaluate general pros and cons of essay - come to actual conclusion don't be indecisive as to what argument is correct
Thank you so much,
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