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Currently in 2nd year studying politics. My essays are usually always 24 marks out of 30. I want to improve, not quite sure how. Does anyone have an example of an essay that's a higher mark than this that I could look at? Or any sort of feedback on the current structure I use? Do I need another paragraph with two points? What's worked for people? Any advice in general?

If beneficial, this is the current structure I use

Introduction

x3 Paragraphs consisting of
-Point
-Evidence
-Analysis
-Counter point
-Evidence
-Analysis
-Judgement/Justify

Help would be greatly appreciated!
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(Original post by Lumi172)
Currently in 2nd year studying politics. My essays are usually always 24 marks out of 30. I want to improve, not quite sure how. Does anyone have an example of an essay that's a higher mark than this that I could look at? Or any sort of feedback on the current structure I use? Do I need another paragraph with two points? What's worked for people? Any advice in general?

If beneficial, this is the current structure I use

Introduction

x3 Paragraphs consisting of
-Point
-Evidence
-Analysis
-Counter point
-Evidence
-Analysis
-Judgement/Justify

Help would be greatly appreciated!
Hey any chance you could send me any esssays you've done in the past as I'm currently struggling to get past 18/ 20. I do similar structuring to you but I still seem to lose marks and my teachers aren't the best with giving feedback. Any recent essay will do
Pleaseee I neeed help
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