So I did my AS History exam back in October and got a C. I was very disappointed since I've been getting A's in all my mocks and previous tests. I got a B in Paper 1 (the source question) and a C in Paper 2 so I only got the latter remarked but my grade remained the same.
The examiner report says that my answers lack focused support, seem assertive and are sometimes just narrative. However, in one question I included all the points mentioned in the mark scheme but still got an 11/20.
I'm assuming my format and/or style is incorrect and I don't back up my points enough and I think my History teacher hasn't been marking me very strictly or according to the assessment guidelines. The teacher also left my school right before the exams and the new teacher has no experience with CIE or actual teaching whatsoever and is of no help with this issue.
I've tried reading exemplars too but it's not helping.
I just want a B at this point because that's all I need for uni.
If anyone would be kind enough to give me any tips for the essay writing I would greatly appreciate it.
P.S I'm taking the Origins and Development of the Cold War component for Paper 3 and International History for Paper 4.