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Economics a level can anyone look at my essay please

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yh the points can be developed more but its still good.
You don't get that many marks for a conclusion so it dm really.

Without conclusion you cannot get more than 19marks. The wholee point of the question is to give a valued conclusion ''Evaluate''. In economics you cannot clasify anything as less inportany the conclusion is as important as the 2 defintions. To master a 25marker you need to get the structure right mate. I see you have a lot of revision to do...

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XDaJokerz

Original post by hwpo1

oh right igy. and yh im doing edexcel A

I heard edexcel is harder? idk

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hwpo1

Original post by XDaJokerz

Looooool allow getting arrogant lmao. My point is, what you write in the conclusion does not matter that much. Having a conclusion at all is what matters. As it allows you to get to the top marking band. Humble yourself yara.