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Can you read my persuasive speech? Please please please please please please. I begging you. I need help. I'm in year 10
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i will read it and say what i think if you wanted to send it over to me? i do (or well... did! before my exams were cancelled!) a level english literature so i may be able to give you some guidance
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I have only done the introduction so far
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Hi, good luck on your speech. Something I would advise is looking on YouTube at TED talks, they’re really good. I did mine last year and got a distinction (‘top grade you can get in speaking), I looked at how they are structured, for example what do they start off with and how most of them end with a question. I’ve looked at your speech and you could end on “ are we really going to let this carry on in society? Haven’t we let enough go already?”, that will get them then thinking about what you’ve said. Here’s a link to a talk I found useful but I’m sure there will be one on your topic as well ( https://youtu.be/SFnMTHhKdkw ) Good Luck and I hope this helps you
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Did you know women face poverty in either old or in extremely old age?. Is that a rhetorical question?
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Did you know women face poverty in either old or in extremely old age?. Is that a rhetorical question?
Yeah that would be one, as long as you ask it and don’t ask for a response. You could say that and then make up a statistic like in the uk shockingly 6 in 10 people over the age of 70 live in poverty
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How long does it last cause we got told it has to be around 5 minutes long and mine was 8 and I still got the top grade? Have you seen how it’s marked? If not I’ll post it on here for you. What you say is important but being clear and confident matters more I found. For example when you present it, if you’re walking around at the front you’re gonna get a higher mark then if you stand still. How long does it last at the moment?
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Need someone to read my statement intention because of its due tomorrow
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Statement of intention for what?
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For a speech
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i ll read it ,
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Oana1389 I really need help, please
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Need someone to read my statement intention because of its due tomorrow
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