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Please can you help me find any mistakes in the following french writing:

Bonjour Tom,

Je vais au bord de la mer en Espagne. J’adore nager en Espagne parce que

c’est très super. Je suis en été aller en France avec mes parents et ma petite

sœur. J'ai trouvé la région intéressante. Nous allons au restaurant et manger

un sandwich au fromage parce que j’ai faim. Je voudrais aller faire de la

planche à voile parce que j’adore. Nous allons peut à Paris parce que

j'ai envie de voir les monuments célèbres de Paris et visiter le Louvre. Où

passes-tu tes vacances en général ? Où es-tu allée l’année dernière ?

À bientôt,
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Please can you help me find any mistakes in the following french writing:

Bonjour Tom,

Je vais au bord de la mer en Espagne. J’adore nager en Espagne parce que

c’est très super. Je suis en été aller en France avec mes parents et ma petite

sœur. J'ai trouvé la région intéressante. Nous allons au restaurant et manger

un sandwich au fromage parce que j’ai faim. Je voudrais aller faire de la

planche à voile parce que j’adore. Nous allons peut à Paris parce que

j'ai envie de voir les monuments célèbres de Paris et visiter le Louvre. Où

passes-tu tes vacances en général ? Où es-tu allée l’année dernière ?

À bientôt,
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Your vocab is very good but you need to work on your grammar (tenses in particular). Can you please send me the English translation so that I can help you translate it into the correct tenses in French. Good try of varied tenses though!
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Your vocab is very good but you need to work on your grammar (tenses in particular). Can you please send me the English translation so that I can help you translate it into the correct tenses in French. Good try of varied tenses though!
I had to write this using imagination.
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I had to write this using imagination.
Is there any chance you could translate it for me? It's hard to tell what tense your trying to use at some points so if you tell me what you're trying to say I can help
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Size:  160.7 KBMaybe this will help a bit! As Bilbocat says, watch your tenses: passé composé or imperfect (the latter for descriptions and repeated actions in the past). Then present or future. Get in touch if you have any questions!
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