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I'm doing a he to nursing through Stonebridge and on unit 4 I have to use quotation and paraphrase on an article they give me.... I'm so damn confused I'm way over my time limit and I just need to get it done, but I can't!! Do I copy one set out and put quotation marks in.... And then take another piece and turn it into the same meaning with my own words... Please help lol.
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What does the full question say?
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What does the full question say?
You are required to write 2 examples of the following using text in the article provided...

Paraphrase
Quotation

You must ensure that the meaning of the original text is conveyed/summerised when paraphrasing.
Quotation examples must be presented in the appropriate manner.

You should also remember to include citations and reference list.
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Hey, I've just done this unit - I've pasted my answer below - it passed marking with no issues



QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1

A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies.

"A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies." (Mohan, R. 2012)

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1

A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies.

Having a decent job as well as a salary that allows you to pay for all of your personal expenses is important and can aid you in realising how important it is to save money in case of an emergency. Earning your own money will mean that you are able to know how valuable money is and that it is not easy to come by. (Mohan, R. 2012)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2

Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times.

"Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times." (Mohan, R. 2012)

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2

Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times.

All parts of life are affected by education. Hindsight is important in making educated decisions, if we knew all potential outcomes we would always make the safest and wisest choice. (Mohan, R. 2012)


Reference

Mohan, R. (2012), “The Importance of Education in Society”,
http://merseamusic.blogspot.co.uk. Last Accessed 17/07/2020



Word Count: 457

Obviously make sure you use your own words and use different parts of the text, but I hope this gives you an idea
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Hey, I've just done this unit - I've pasted my answer below - it passed marking with no issues



QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1

A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies.

"A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies." (Mohan, R. 2012)

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1

A decent employment would be combined with hard-earned remuneration or salary through which you can look after your personal expenses. While you earn for yourself, you gradually begin to realize the true worth of money and how hard it is to
earn it. You realize the significance of saving for a rainy day and for unforeseeable contingencies.

Having a decent job as well as a salary that allows you to pay for all of your personal expenses is important and can aid you in realising how important it is to save money in case of an emergency. Earning your own money will mean that you are able to know how valuable money is and that it is not easy to come by. (Mohan, R. 2012)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2

Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times.

"Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times." (Mohan, R. 2012)

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2

Education plays its continuous role in all spheres of life. The reason being, that if we are aware of the drawbacks of a decision and we know about the possible contingencies and the collateral damage, our consequent actions would be wiser, which would help us to keep danger at bay at all times.

All parts of life are affected by education. Hindsight is important in making educated decisions, if we knew all potential outcomes we would always make the safest and wisest choice. (Mohan, R. 2012)


Reference

Mohan, R. (2012), “The Importance of Education in Society”,
http://merseamusic.blogspot.co.uk. Last Accessed 17/07/2020



Word Count: 457

Obviously make sure you use your own words and use different parts of the text, but I hope this gives you an idea
Thank you so much, this helps massively 😍
I just couldn't get my head around this for some reason. Thanks again 😁
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No probs at all, P.S. I'm also doing the access to nursing so if you need any help with other assignments give me a shout, I'm currently doing unit 5
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No probs at all, P.S. I'm also doing the access to nursing so if you need any help with other assignments give me a shout, I'm currently doing unit 5
Thank you so much... That would be brilliant 😁
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Hi everyone, I'm doing the Nursing course as well. I'm on Unit 3 the quotation and paraphrasing as well. So we don't have to do the whole article? Do we just have to pick two examples from the article? I've been under a lot of stress the last few months, with family illness, arguments and my parents seperating.

I have just joined the student room. I found a lot of help on here when I was doing Unit 2. I hated unit 2 and had to resubmit twice.

I feel a bit daft because with having to ask for help, but I know we all need help and support through our studies.

If someone could help I would be grateful.

Michele xxx
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No just pick two examples then qoute and paraphrase the ones you picked...

I'm running behind at the min, but it can't be helped with life and a global pandemic, they need to cut us some slack, especially when you have children at home lol...

But no this forum is ever so helpful... And I will help anyway I can. Xx
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No just pick two examples then qoute and paraphrase the ones you picked...

I'm running behind at the min, but it can't be helped with life and a global pandemic, they need to cut us some slack, especially when you have children at home lol...

But no this forum is ever so helpful... And I will help anyway I can. Xx
Thank you so much hun. I have been under stresd with family stresd, family drama and health problems. I help care for my dad and at the moment he is seperating from my mum.
I'll probably take you up on your offer hun
I'm hoping once I get past Unit 3 that I'll start getting into it

Thank you again hunny

Michele xxc
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