OCR English Language A level structure HELP!

Hi guys,

I am doing language under the microscope section though I am really struggling in structuring my paragraphs, I have stayed at roughly the same grade for the whole year without any improvements, :cry:

whenever I ask for feedback from my teachers they only say to improve grammar though I am 100% sure that is not the only thing that I need improving on, I have taken the initiative to look at the OCR exemplar essays and have implemented it into my essays from the very beginning but still my teacher doesn't give me anything higher. :frown:

I don't know how to effectively write the essays at a higher level whilst ticking off all the mark scheme points, so can someone help me by forwarding their a/a* essay.

It would be much appreciated... :smile: