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would anyone be interested in reviewing my personal statement? i’m an international student applying to oxford and i’m not really used to writing essays. most of the ones i’ve written are us-style sentimental, fluffy pieces and i haven’t ever written a more serious one. would anyone be willing to check it out and tell me how i can improve?
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would anyone be interested in reviewing my personal statement? i’m an international student applying to oxford and i’m not really used to writing essays. most of the ones i’ve written are us-style sentimental, fluffy pieces and i haven’t ever written a more serious one. would anyone be willing to check it out and tell me how i can improve?
Do not send your personal statement to someone you don’t know or post it anywhere online - you risk the statement being plagiarised which would mean rewriting the whole PS again.

Do you have teachers at your school who can help? Or equally there’s a personal statement checker on this site
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Do not send your personal statement to someone you don’t know or post it anywhere online - you risk the statement being plagiarised which would mean rewriting the whole PS again.

Do you have teachers at your school who can help? Or equally there’s a personal statement checker on this site
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(Original post by dawnysaur)
would anyone be interested in reviewing my personal statement? i’m an international student applying to oxford and i’m not really used to writing essays. most of the ones i’ve written are us-style sentimental, fluffy pieces and i haven’t ever written a more serious one. would anyone be willing to check it out and tell me how i can improve?
Please do not post any part of your personal statement here. This is because of plagiarism issues.

Here is a private forum in which you can send your personal statement and a person with expertise in the area will review and give tips:

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=134
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Please do not post any part of your personal statement here. This is because of plagiarism issues.

Here is a private forum in which you can send your personal statement and a person with expertise in the area will review and give tips:

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=134
Is the private forum for checking statements safe in terms of plagiarism risk?
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Is the private forum for checking statements safe in terms of plagiarism risk?
Yes. No need to worry about that. Your personal statement is safe. Only you and and the person reviewing your personal statement will be able to see it.
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Please do not post any part of your personal statement here. This is because of plagiarism issues.

Here is a private forum in which you can send your personal statement and a person with expertise in the area will review and give tips:

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=134
hey, thank you so much. i had no idea about this.
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Do not send your personal statement to someone you don’t know or post it anywhere online - you risk the statement being plagiarised which would mean rewriting the whole PS again.

Do you have teachers at your school who can help? Or equally there’s a personal statement checker on this site
yeah that’s a really big thing, i’ll just check the private one. thanks!
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Do not send your personal statement to someone you don’t know or post it anywhere online - you risk the statement being plagiarised which would mean rewriting the whole PS again.

Do you have teachers at your school who can help? Or equally there’s a personal statement checker on this site
wheres the personal statement chker
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Check out this thread for information: https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/sho....php?t=4237154
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