History and Politics personal statement

can someone give me advice on how to improve my personal statement? If want to take a look can you message me or email me [email protected]

I wouldn't recommend sending it to randomers who PM you - they could be fellow applicants looking to pinch (parts of) your statement Then you're the one who'd get into trouble/have to write your PS again from scratch

There is a safe place in TSR where vetted and trained reviewers can look at your PS: https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=1372 . It's safe and won't be detected by the UCAS plagiarism checker.

If you're applying for Oxbridge, best to post it in there (by clicking 'start new discussion' button and making your own thread in what looks to you like the empty forum) asap, as there's not long to go!

thank you!