Please can someone check this Spanish URGENT?

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Hey, so this is a 90 word GCSE draft. so is it right? and any tips how could make it more complicated and maybe cut down on a couple of words (it's 107 rn). thanks in advance!Name:  image-358f06fe-1dad-4af5-af77-529338000d607107032967531489433-compressed.jpg.jpeg
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Hey, so this is a 90 word GCSE draft. so is it right? and any tips how could make it more complicated and maybe cut down on a couple of words (it's 107 rn). thanks in advance!Name:  image-358f06fe-1dad-4af5-af77-529338000d607107032967531489433-compressed.jpg.jpeg
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These are some of my corrections. I've deleted and changed some words and I've managed to get it down to 91 words:

En mi familia somos cuatro: mi hermana, mis padres y yo. Me llevo bien con mi familia pero a veces mi hermana se mosquea conmigo porque soy muy competitivo y trato de hacer todo una competición, esto puede causar discusiones y hacer que se enfade.

Mi familia discutía sobre qué hacer con el exterior de la casa. ¡Tratar de convencerlos es un martirio!

No sé si quiero casarme y tener hijos todavía porque soy muy indeciso, aunque no estoy ni a favor ni en contra del matrimonio, es una decisión personal.
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