made these lyrics in 1 minute are they ok?🔥🔥🔥👌👌

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Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you make me want to change
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really rough

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me cause you broke my heart in twine so easily

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
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I'd say there pretty good for being created in 1 minute.
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(Original post by TSKR)
Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you driving me insane
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really roughing

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
That took you a minute?! It usually takes me hours to make songs, and they are usually mediocre lol. They're amazing!
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That took you a minute?! It usually takes me hours to make songs, and they are usually mediocre lol. They're amazing!
Yeah it took a minute I don’t really think they are that good but thank you.
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I'd say there pretty good for being created in 1 minute.
Thank you
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(Original post by TSKR)
Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you make me want to change
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really roughing

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me cause you broke my heart in twine so easily

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Your song is really good it's better than most lyrics nowadays which makes no sense anymore.
You have talent if this took you a minute to write.
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Your song is really good it's better than most lyrics nowadays which makes no sense anymore.
You have talent if this took you a minute to write.
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Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you make me want to change
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really roughing

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me cause you broke my heart in twine so easily

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
You wrote all of that in a minute? ...
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You wrote all of that in a minute? ...
Yeah I can type pretty fast . Is it ok?
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You should use the word 'rough' instead of the verb form 'roughing' and it's 'in twain' but other than that it's alright.
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Yeah I can type pretty fast . Is it ok?
It’s pretty good!
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You should use the word 'rough' instead of the verb form 'roughing' and it's 'in twain' but other than that it's alright.
Thanks I just fixed the rough piece but other than that ima leave it be because it shows that I did have to rush a bit
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It’s pretty good!
Thanks!
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Yeah it took a minute I don’t really think they are that good but thank you.
They're certainly better than anything I could make :lol:
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They're certainly better than anything I could make :lol:
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Also there is this people have been having some trouble listing but I think I fixed it

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Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you make me want to change
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really rough

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me cause you broke my heart in twine so easily

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
WOW! Sir/Madam all I can say is that is beautiful. And u came up with it in 1 minute - again wow.
you are really good with coming up with songs! - me, I sing more than write songs ( is ign like 24/7 hehe. literally ill be doing anything and ill sing) and when i do write songs they always come out really bad
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(Original post by TSKR)
Girl you driving me Insane
Every day you act the same
Yea you make me want to change
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why

I bled out my tears for you so many times that now I’m bone dry
With blood levels on the rise
Getting tired of the lies
Now I’m getting sick of all the other guys that you said that you loved
You left me all alone and unloved

I thought that I had misjudged
Thought that I was beloved
Thought that I was getting hated on from above
You honestly made my life really rough

But then I analyzed
And I realized
That my love for you had died
That my love for you had died ever so slowly over time
An honestly that was fine with me cause you broke my heart in twine so easily

Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
Yea your giving me this pain in my heart and I can’t explain why
WOW! Sir/Madam all I can say is that is beautiful. And u came up with it in 1 minute - again wow.
you are really good with coming up with songs! - me, I sing more than write songs ( is ign like 24/7 hehe. literally ill be doing anything and ill sing) and when i do write songs they always come out really bad
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Really?
Yep. Didn't I tell you I lost inspiration? My songs are absolute rubbish. :lol:
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