A level French Grammar Check pt2

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Can someone please check if what I wrote makes sense, please??

J’ai obtenu les bienfaits personnels ainsi que les bienfaits professionnels faire du bénévolat a l’étranger. Tout d’abord les bienfaits personnels, faire du bénévolat pour le travail caritative a l’étranger offre une accomplissement. Contrairement aux emplois de bureau que beaucoup de gens travaillaient tous les jours, vous saurez que votre travail aide a changer la vie des gens pour le mieux. Deuxièmement les bienfaits personnels, vous apprend de nouvelles compétences langue, vivre et travailler dans une autre pays et la meilleure façon d’apprendre une nouvelle langue parce que vous l’enture parler autour de vous et de l’utiliser vous-même tout le temps.
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You might like the site https://bonpatron.com/en/ - it will highlight in yellow any grammar you might want to check, and explain why it thinks so. Obviously it can't check for overall cohesiveness, but it's proven very useful for me over the years, and I've learnt a lot from just checking the things it has highlighted to try and justify to myself why I am either right or wrong.
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