Rate my song Be as honest as you can

I feel so high
like a flying kite
far in the sky
The memories are so very dear
when you are here
I have no fear

so lets dance the night away
like its the last one
Have you no shame, don't ya have one
Don't ya wanna dance the night away and be free
With me
DO DO DO DO DODO
Together we are the key
DoDo Do Do Do Do
The Key~~

you felt so free
like a stinging bee
that di-dnt die
what a night~

We danced the night away
like it was the last one
You had no shame, no ya di-dnt have one
with me
you are free.

We ran away
without leaving a trace
cuz with me you are free
and with you, I am no longer
blue
Together
we are the key



This is my first time writing a "song"
and I would also like to know if it has parts where it's like another song and if so what that song is called

that lowkey slaps i love it