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i have an essay tomorrow on discussing and evaluating the multi-store model and it's a 16 marker. On my draft essay, my teacher said i wrote too much information for A01 and less information for AO4-evaluations

But idk what evaluations really are and how to structure it in an exam essay. So does anyone know any of the evaluations for MSM and how to structure them. 4 evaluations will be amazing

p.s. my exam board is AQA
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Use your notes
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Use your notes
saying that doesn't help. if you're not going to help please stop replying to questions.
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Size:  138.4 KB this is a model answer for a MSM essay Q my teacher gave me last year, hope it can help sorry my writing is not great!
thank you this is very helpful, i appreaciate it!
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