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Hi everyone,
I really need help with this unseen poetry question. The question is:
I really need help with this unseen poetry question. The question is:
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I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
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I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
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so it’s only 8 marks. What I did was 3 points - 2 similarities and 1 difference and some brief analysis. This doesn’t need to be too detailed as the only thing assessed is AO2 (comparison of methods)
so it’s only 8 marks. What I did was 3 points - 2 similarities and 1 difference and some brief analysis. This doesn’t need to be too detailed as the only thing assessed is AO2 (comparison of methods)
I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks
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That’s really excellent 😱😱 I’d say they both use refrains (I love you) and one uses natural imagery whilst the other uses heat imagery with the warmth and fire (talk about metaphors in this comparison)
That’s really excellent 😱😱 I’d say they both use refrains (I love you) and one uses natural imagery whilst the other uses heat imagery with the warmth and fire (talk about metaphors in this comparison)
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I know the last paragraph is a difference but don’t know how the different structure will change how they present feelings. I really need help for the last paragraph as I’ve said two differences in structure but not really explained it as I don’t know how to.
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Hi, thanks so much for all your help! I don’t really know how to word or structure that point. Could you please give me an example of what you would right?
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hey nicola, im doing the i am offering this poem exam next week and was wondering if you remembered the question for it 
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I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
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Hi could you send me the paragraph too I’m am doing that poem now and I am struggling for ideas what do you write? Thank you
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Hi could you send me the paragraph too, I am doing that poem now and I am struggling on what to write can you help x
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(Original post by nicola_7x)
I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.
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Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?
I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks
Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?
I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks
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(Original post by Happs_2705)
Hi everyone,
I really need help with this unseen poetry question. The question is:
Hi everyone,
I really need help with this unseen poetry question. The question is:
(Original post by Happs_2705)
Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?
I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks
Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?
I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks
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(Original post by Masumabv)
Can someone do like two paragraphs for similarities and differences
Can someone do like two paragraphs for similarities and differences
1- both use repetition of "i love you" to emphasise that love is powerful. In i am offering this poem: I love you is repeated after harsh times (ie being lost in the wilderness) to show that love is more powerful then anything else that exist (you can mention other examples that are in the poem) In the sun has burst the sky: Love is presented as being powerful enough to create new opportunities (you can talk about how the writer keeps saying "beacuse i love you" to tell the reader that love is the foundation for everything)
2- Both use enjambment. ( haven't looked at this in detail but IAOTP= love is above all situations. Nothing can get in the way of it. TSHBTS= love is present in things like nature and is constantly surrounding us)
Hope this helps <3
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For 2 similarities
1- both use repetition of "i love you" to emphasise that love is powerful. In i am offering this poem: I love you is repeated after harsh times (ie being lost in the wilderness) to show that love is more powerful then anything else that exist (you can mention other examples that are in the poem) In the sun has burst the sky: Love is presented as being powerful enough to create new opportunities (you can talk about how the writer keeps saying "beacuse i love you" to tell the reader that love is the foundation for everything)
2- Both use enjambment. ( haven't looked at this in detail but IAOTP= love is above all situations. Nothing can get in the way of it. TSHBTS= love is present in things like nature and is constantly surrounding us)
Hope this helps <3
For 2 similarities
1- both use repetition of "i love you" to emphasise that love is powerful. In i am offering this poem: I love you is repeated after harsh times (ie being lost in the wilderness) to show that love is more powerful then anything else that exist (you can mention other examples that are in the poem) In the sun has burst the sky: Love is presented as being powerful enough to create new opportunities (you can talk about how the writer keeps saying "beacuse i love you" to tell the reader that love is the foundation for everything)
2- Both use enjambment. ( haven't looked at this in detail but IAOTP= love is above all situations. Nothing can get in the way of it. TSHBTS= love is present in things like nature and is constantly surrounding us)
Hope this helps <3
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