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Hi everyone,
I am beginning to write up my draft report for my EPQ but my supervisor has advised me to make my title 'more analytical' perhaps by adding and....... on the end of what I already have but I don't really know what she means.
My title is currently this:

Have Women’s rights and the attitudes towards it evolved since the Suffragette movement?

And I don't know whether adding this makes it analytical enough?

........and does this correlate with the changing societal standards?

What do you think?
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(Original post by zarastephenson)
Hi everyone,
I am beginning to write up my draft report for my EPQ but my supervisor has advised me to make my title 'more analytical' perhaps by adding and....... on the end of what I already have but I don't really know what she means.
My title is currently this:

Have Women’s rights and the attitudes towards it evolved since the Suffragette movement?

And I don't know whether adding this makes it analytical enough?

........and does this correlate with the changing societal standards?

What do you think?
Probably start off with 'how', instead of just have, and you might want to narrow your subject matter down a little, this seems like a very interesting (but broad) topic!
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Probably start off with 'how', instead of just have, and you might want to narrow your subject matter down a little, this seems like a very interesting (but broad) topic!
Thanks, do you think the part about societal standards is okay also?
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Thanks, do you think the part about societal standards is okay also?
Yeah I think it would work really well, but I'd be careful because there's so much behind the idea that your essay may be difficult to keep a bit shorter
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