Hi, my teacher graded my work as a 5/6 about January 2010 and I did AQA (I am not sure how different it would be).
English LiteratureTo improve, honestly I know this sounds cliche, I found online essay questions and practiced writing them, You don’t have to start in timed conditions but I suggest you eventually start doing it. If you find you have too much work, maybe do essay plans, With this, you should get a better understanding of the text and if you are struggling to answer the essay question, you can find ideas online. You can also watch Mr Bruff, Mr Salles, Stacy Reays and many more in YouTube you get analysis ideas. I think it’s important you get more than one interpretation for any quotes you plan to use because I think examiners like that and also remember to use context but do not throw it in just for the sake of context make sure it helps your point. e.g. Priestley presents Mr Birling as a capitalist through his dialogue. He describes the Titanic as ‘Absolutely unsinkable’ (not sure of the exact quote). The audience who are watching in 1946? are aware the Titanic sank as a result of the hubris of those who are in charge of it and foreshadows the eventual sinking and downfall of Mr Birling and his Capitalist ideology (sorry not the best point - it been two years!
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English LanguageIf you are finding it a little to difficult to think up techniques you can find lists on the internet. Make sure when analysis techniques to mention the effect on the reader. For example, in a language passage, there maybe a sentence which is really long with many commas. You could say The writer (it best to name the writer) uses sentence form to increase the pace of the text, When the sentence is ready the breaks created by the commas makes the reader breathless hence increases the tension??? (Sorry again it has been two years!). Also, remember sentence length (i.e. short or long) relates to structure sentence form (simple, complex) relates to language so question 2 in the language paper. You can use these to come up with points for language and structure.
Advice For both language and literature, use topic sentences to focus your answers e.g. if the question is about how Sheila changes throughout the play you can say, PRIESTLEY (just wanted to emphasise the use writer’s name
) presents Sheila as becoming increasingly distance to her mother as the play progressed through NOUNS (remember to be woe Idid when talking about language especially in the language paper. Instead of saying ‘words’ but ‘noun’, ‘verb’ or ‘adverb’ etc). What I am trying to say is, be SPECIFIC (just wanted to emphasis with
)Initially, in the play she uses the noun ‘mummy’ which is child like and affectionate which makes the reader understand she is fond and loving of her mother (shows effect on reader). The soft ‘m’ sounds emphasises this This is also one of the techniques with multiple interpret notation.However, towards the end of the play (I don’t remember exactly what bit), she uses the noun ‘mother’ which is a lot more distance and the ‘th’ sounds makes it sound more harsh than ‘mummy’ showing THE READER Sheila is trying to distance herself from her mother (end of example - again, not the best!) As you can see for ‘mummy’ quotes use more than one technique so I suggest you mention more than one technique e.g. ‘fire, blood and anguish’ is an example of rule of three but be sure to also analysis it’s allusions to hell.
Additionally, remember to say ‘poet’ when talking about a poet and ‘author’ when talking about Priestley etc. (I hope this helps, If you want more clarification, I will be happy to reply! Do a lot of papers and ask your teacher to make them is possible. Perhaps a friend might like to help too!
I hope this is useful.