The Student Room Group
Competition - post a photo you've taken of nature >>
Competition - post a photo you've taken of nature >>
Competition - post a photo you've taken of nature >>

Help on poetry

So, the other day, some of you may remember that I posted a thread asking for reviews on a poem I wrote. However, I was convinced that it needed work. So, I spent the last few days re-re-re-writing it. Now, please tell me your honest opinions.

Thanks.

Title: Time To Fade Away

Days of long ago
Welcome to the final show
Actions speak louder than words
We are a written record

I saw you fade away
Never found anyone to stay
Cold and lonely
Nobody to hold

Alone in the dark
Chimes of a broken heart
Go back to the start
Before we fell apart

This is goodbye
No tears left to cry
One last thing to say
Time to let you fade away

Quick Reply

Related discussions

Latest

Trending

Trending

Articles for you