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Hi, i'm new to this website! I was wondering whether anyone could help me with an essay. The question is:

‘The poem is a tale of hopelessness, of a caged bird’s inability to sing of freedom because she doesn’t know what it is’ – Douglas Allen Rhodes.
To what extent can the concept of an ‘inability to sing of freedom because she [he] doesn’t know what it is’ be applied to the lives of Pinkie, Ida and Rose in ‘Brighton Rock’?

I have about a page worth of writing but I'm afraid i keep going off topic. If anyone could give me some pointers i would greatly appreciate it! Thanks guys
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Hello
Show me a photo of your work
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Hello
Show me a photo of your work
Um i think i have attached it, probably the worst essay i've ever written but there u go. Obviously not finished!
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Not able to view the attached file at all but this is only a idea. Do a character comparison exercise. This can be either in the form of a table or chart. List the positives and negatives of each character as well. Other useful helpful suggestions include making notes to use as the basis of your entire coursework essay. Also if you can pm me a picture of your work that would be good.
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Size:  87.4 KBOkay i think i attached the screenshots, it wont let me pm you as i am new to the website. And thanks so much, i will defo give that a go!
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Pretty good so far
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