Tsunami Disaster TSR Acrostic Poem - please contribute

It would be nice if as many TSR members as possible could contribute to this poem. It's kind of like signing a book of condolence except you add a line to the poem. I have done the two lines , someone else does the next line and so on. If the poem is filled then I will add more words horizontally there are rules though, your line must only fill one line of screen and the last word you use in your line must rhyme with that of the previous or sound like it. For example wear and tear of wear and hair. You are also welcome to choose a colour for you part of the text.

TSR Tsunami Appeal Acrostic Poem

Tributries of tears flow
Sunrise has lost it's glow
United we all are
Now is the time to help
And to try to lighten the loss they've felt
May their souls rest in peace
Is all that I can wish

Afraid to wander the world alone
Please never forget those that you love
Pay a little attention to the forgotten
Each individual is apart
Attach the bonds toghether
Link up the spaces between

Prevent this people dying, your
Love can help them heal,
Everyone can do their bit.
Always remember the pain this has caused, their
Suffering can be stopped,
Ease their pain and you'll feel better for it.

Don't be afraid,
Of giving up your time.
Now is important
And to help them is the key.
Try your hardest to donate
Everything you possibly can.

Tomorrow is another day for the West
Or anotherday or terror for the East

Helping those in need will give you a sense of pride
E nsuring happiness to those whose families have died
L et us pray and make sure that we are there
P lease have a heart and show that you care

Anyone can show their love
I'll give a little money to help
Destiny now seems to open it's heart

Run and do all you can
Ensure to help every man
All of us should help them
Crying children, women and men
Hopfully you will see, that we are the only ones

May their relatives be removed from their grief
I only wish, that their pain will be vanquished.
Lighten up their lives
Let them live another day
Inside we fight the hatred
Of the dangers of the storms
Never again shall we face this
So let's prevent this war on nature

Often we pray
For salvation

Shut the mouth of curses and have a little compassion.
Under the seas of the villages
Follow the lords example and place your
Feet on water feel the
Effects of its glory
Rise above it and clear it away
Ignore it's live giving properties
Nothing is righteous with salt
Go home to your wasteland

People are stranded
Everyday they fight
Origins of civilisation gone
Peace has vanished
Lost for words, swallowed by terrible pain,
Eternal peace I wish for them in vain

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This tragic disaster we hope to never occur again in the days of tomorrow,
Howling wind brings back devastating memories and sorrow
In this we find we hide in the burrow
Sheltering from the natural rage

Though we sometimes forget to remember
Rain clouds are our inner feelings
At the end of the final "tragedy"
Getting together is the key
Everyone needs help,
Do you not understand?
You must all make a stand.

Reply 1

Slice'N'Dice

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U - United we all are

Reply 2

fordeletionpurposesonly.

N- Now is the time for us all to help
A- And try to lighten the loss they've felt

(I know that that it doesn't go with the rules, don't have to use it if you don't want to...)

Reply 3

Everdawn

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.....Ill just give more money....hows that sound?

Reply 4

Wild Thing

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May their souls rest in peace, in eternal relief
Is all that I can wish

Reply 5

Wild Thing

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This tragic disaster we hope to never occur again in the days of tomorrow,
Howling wind brings back devastating memories and sorrow.

Reply 6

musicbloke

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wild thing

May their souls rest in peace, in eternal relief
Is all that I can wish

weell apart from this issue of souls and eternity being fictional entities it's alright.

MB

Reply 7

Wild Thing

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Lost for words, swallowed by terrible pain,
Peace is all that i can wish them in vain.

does that even make sense?
otherwise queenoftheuniverse put something like Please don't forget this tragedy again or something like that (sry im pretty crap at this)

Reply 8

]{ingnik

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musicboy

weell apart from this issue of souls and eternity being fictional entities it's alright.

MB

shut the hell up and have a little compassion

Reply 9

Wild Thing

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oh fine music boy..i'll try again! well im crap at this its not my fault if I wasnt born with a poetic 'mind' but its the fact that i AM trying that counts.

May their relatives be removed from their grief
I only wish, that their pain will be vanquished.

Reply 10

alkaeda

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M - may all the men undo their belts

Reply 11

Wild Thing

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pfff i completely give up...sry queenoftheuniverse! :frown:

Reply 12

LH

15

Bloody hell how long do you want the poem to be?! Perhaps a short and heartfelt message would be better.

Reply 13

Wild Thing

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hehe..point taken..though i think she's trying to get all the members to contribute

Reply 14

Trigger

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screw that il do it in my own wat its TT vying for attention yet again

Reply 15

LPK

20

its nice what your doing TT but (i no this is going to sound really mean and its not meant to) this isnt going to help anyone. Or will it have any affect on people who have lost relatives in this forum. it is a nice thought but it is rather pointless. The poem is way too long too.

Reply 16

priya

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there has been endless discussion on the forum about the disaster; that hasn't helped anyone either, but we still did it.

Reply 17

ladyshort4u

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H elping those in need will give you a sense of pride
E nsuring happiness to those whose families have died
L et us pray and make sure that we are there
P lease have a heart and show that you care

there you go :biggrin:

love ladyshort

Reply 18

Queenoftheuniverse

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wild thing

This tragic disaster we hope to never occur again in the days of tomorrow,
Howling wind brings back devastating memories and sorrow.

The lines are slightly too long, i'm going to edit them slightly, if you don't like what iv'e done please let me know.

Reply 19

Jonah Ramone

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Prevent this people dying, your
Love can help them heal,
Everyone can do their bit.
Always remember the pain this has caused, their
Suffering can be stopped,
Ease THIER pain and you'll feel better for it.

There you go.

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