AQA poetry comparison (Bayonet charge and Kamikaze)

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OK so, poetry assessment in a bit and was wondering if anyone could help me structure an intro/conc. i have quite good idea on how to structure my main points, but no idea on what to include in the intro/conc, and whether I need it all.
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OK so, poetry assessment in a bit and was wondering if anyone could help me structure an intro/conc. i have quite good idea on how to structure my main points, but no idea on what to include in the intro/conc, and whether I need it all.
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So for the intro I would include a kind of summary of the key points your gna argue in your essay and outline one of the points comparing both poems in a bit more detail so for example
Both Kamikaze and Bayonet charge ....................... In Kamizake, we see this .............. In Bayonet Charge we see this ............. Both poets may have done this to ............ ( plus this accounts for AO4 marks)
Then for the conclusion summarise the key points you’ve argued, So maybe something like Both poets ........ in order to .......
Hope this helps
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