scarlett6982
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For my french mock we have to write a short speech
this is what i've written so far:
Je vais parler de mes activités préférées. J'adore lire, quand j'étais plus jeune je lisais Harry Potter et Percy Jackson mais maintenant j'aime lire des livres d'histoire, les livres d'histoire sont plus intéressants que les autobiographies. Je n'aime pas les autobiographies, je pense qu'elles sont vraiment mauvaises. J'aime aussi nager, j'admire Michael Phelps c'est un bon nageur. J'aime aussi aller en ville avec mes amis, la semaine dernière nous sommes allés au cinéma et la semaine prochaine nous avons fait du shopping.

But my french is rubbish so are there any ways i could improve it
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Your French looks fine overall, good job! The only error I can see is your conjugation of "faire" in the last line - translated literally, you've put "next week we have done shopping."

Otherwise, maybe say why you think autobiographies are bad? But it's been a while since I did French in school, so take my comments with a pinch of salt
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