Hi, some feedback for your introduction is that it is quite long. When it comes to writing essays in exam conditions, you will not be able to write introductions like that, so it's best to start preparing on how to write succinct introductions. Some tips that I would give are:
- Define some key phrases/words in the question (what's your definition/ how will you refer to it in your essay)
- Question some assumptions (is it really a trade-off/ doesn't saving people's lives come first above all)
- Give a mention to some points that you will talk about in your essay