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I haven't written anything in years but I had a thought so I just wrote it. I don't know anything about dance but this is a thought I had so I wrote about it.

I'm not sure if this is any good. It's probably not but I thought I'd post it anyway. My terminology and stuff came from wikipedia

Life is like a waltz

You are always travelling, moving through the world like a pendulum
The pace can change

Slow careful steps turn into a fantastical fall of feet
Swinging through the days, through the seasons
Elegant moments and poses caught in the movement of two people together even if just for a second

Life is not a waltz

There is no choreography, no certainty
Nothing to secure you as you fall through the motions
Life is not elegant
It's a tangle of limbs, emotions and thoughts
An uncoordinated tumble

Like a waltz, you need two people
You need to find the person who makes you feel like life is a waltz

Like life is a beautiful thing worth dancing around

You need someone who you can see your life with, picture it like you know steps in a dance

I hope that one day I can dance with someone
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Anonymous #1
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I dont know if this is poetry, a bunch of rubbish or a short story or just some words but I wanted to put it somewhere
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I both want and don't want feedback on this. I feel like its a bit bad that I have am posting on here again in the hopes someone sees this. I dont know if people aren't reading it or just dont like it
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jenerous
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I'm not sure what this is either tbh.
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(Original post by jenerous)
I'm not sure what this is either tbh.
Glad its not just me. It's random rubbish I wrote for no reason
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Anonymous #1
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(Original post by jenerous)
I'm not sure what this is either tbh.
It is rubbish right?
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(Original post by Anonymous)
It is rubbish right?
Maybe, maybe not, doesn't matter, point is you created something.
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(Original post by ROTL94)
Maybe, maybe not, doesn't matter, point is you created something.
Yeah I know I just don’t like being bad at stuff, I used to write a lot when I was younger and haven’t for years and I just felt like doing it tonight
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