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“ I stared at the sky, and remembered how it had once been a black canvas illuminated by the hope of stars but was now just a black hole tainted with the glory of patriotism and the grey misery of war “
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No it’s fine!
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Nothing is 'cringe' unless you think of it to be the mere word is unsightly I don't understand why people use it...
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“ I stared at the sky, and remembered how it had once been a black canvas illuminated by the hope of stars but was now just a black hole tainted with the glory of patriotism and the grey misery of war “
noooooo its goooood
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No it’s fine!
Pmg thank god i wrote it in my narrative for my mocks and thought my teacher was going to be like what a weirdo
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(Original post by Bubbles_1234)
noooooo its goooood
Omg olkk good
(Original post by RoadtoSuccess)
Nothing is 'cringe' unless you think of it to be the mere word is unsightly I don't understand why people use it...
Same tbh but yes thanks
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(Original post by Sohello)
“ I stared at the sky, and remembered how it had once been a black canvas illuminated by the hope of stars but was now just a black hole tainted with the glory of patriotism and the grey misery of war “
It's a bit overdramatic, really.
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It’s fine mate
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