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To what extent does increasing bicycle usage help answer environmental issues?
I wrote about short extent (overfishing, factories waste disposed on rivers and an increase in pop increasing the demand and supply for electricity and food causing shortage are my 3 main points) and bicycles do not emit any gases as counter point. Is my content out of context?
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Your approach is quite out of context...you need to be quite specific and answer the question
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Your approach is quite out of context...you need to be quite specific and answer the question
I said that bicycles only swap out one factor out of the others which r responsible for environmental problems and stated the other factors too. I also explained whether bicycles are an answer in my counter balance.
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You did well to mention other factors as well. That helps to expand the scope of the paper and shows that you master the content. How about you mention use of bicycles...
1) Reduces the carbon blue print
2) Reduces greenhouse gases that cause global warming
3) Reduces acid rain that effects on aquatic life
4) Encourages a healthy lifestyle because it is a form of exercise etc, and use good references
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You did well to mention other factors as well. That helps to expand the scope of the paper and shows that you master the content. How about you mention use of bicycles...
1) Reduces the carbon blue print
2) Reduces greenhouse gases that cause global warming
3) Reduces acid rain that effects on aquatic life
4) Encourages a healthy lifestyle because it is a form of exercise etc, and use good references
I mentioned and explained the first 3 points in my counter balance. My other 3 main points are based on other factors because cycling helps solve environmental problems to a small extent. Another qn of mine is that Healthy lifestyle has nothing to do with environmental problems So ig we can't use ur 4th point
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