How to conclude my personal statement?

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I've written most of my personal statement (Geography) except the conclusion. The rest of the PS is pretty good (at least my teachers think so) but I can't figure out how to make a good conclusion. Any tips?
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You could write about how you hope your degree will benefit you in the future and what you're looking forward to
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Sum up why you want to do geography
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Hi! I’m taking Geography too! For my PS I found the final sentence the hardest bit. What I found was to say something impactful and sums up everything I’ve talked about. I talked all through my PS how education was important - and that’s what I put in my final line saying that studying geography would help me educate and spur positive change in society. Look through key geography topics or skills you’ve written about then sum it up how studying geography will XYZ you
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(Original post by emilyalicerooney)
Hi! I’m taking Geography too! For my PS I found the final sentence the hardest bit. What I found was to say something impactful and sums up everything I’ve talked about. I talked all through my PS how education was important - and that’s what I put in my final line saying that studying geography would help me educate and spur positive change in society. Look through key geography topics or skills you’ve written about then sum it up how studying geography will XYZ you
In my PS I mostly talked about how interested I was in the concepts/process that make our world work so I'll probably just talk more about how I want to continue exploring those processes at a deeper level. Thanks for the help!
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