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Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
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Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken Of bosom bone! Beautiful like A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition. Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming, I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima Omega; repeopled by her. Oh playing the drums! Made up out Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
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Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
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Intriguing
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Intriguing
Thank you my friend
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Thank you my friend
What inspired this piece of work?
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What inspired this piece of work?
A lot of 19th century French poetry, sorry if it's weird!
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A lot of 19th century French poetry, sorry if it's weird!
Don’t be daft, I love poetry
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Don’t be daft, I love poetry
That's cool, who are your favourite poets? Or favourite poet, I really want to know.
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That's cool, who are your favourite poets? Or favourite poet, I really want to know.
I’ve got controversial taste but a few I really like are Wilfred Owen, carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage. Who are your favorites?
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I’ve got controversial taste but a few I really like are Wilfred Owen, carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage. Who are your favorites?
Oh wow, those are really cool choices, I've read poems by all of them, although I don't remember the names. I like Paul Valery!
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Oh wow, those are really cool choices, I've read poems by all of them, although I don't remember the names. I like Paul Valery!
I’ll name my favorites by each of them just in case you know them, Dulce et Decorum est, Medusa, and Mother any distance.
I like Paul Valery, if I remember correctly he wrote the faux death
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I’ll name my favorites by each of them just in case you know them, Dulce et Decorum est, Medusa, and Mother any distance.
I like Paul Valery, if I remember correctly he wrote the faux death
I'm going to read all the poems you named!

And yeah he did, his style's really cerebral and he has great technique. Wilfred Owen's really really talented as well.
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I'm going to read all the poems you named!

And yeah he did, his style's really cerebral and he has great technique. Wilfred Owen's really really talented as well.
You should!

He sounds good, I think I’ll read some more of his work. I find Wilfred Owen astonishing, unfortunate about his untimely death, how much more he could have given!
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The porcelain of a dragon, ratherly, the
Tea of a pigcup, on the beach
Of a Cornishman, a single mottled drop of
Sperm, running by its spine a river, was, flotsam
Of an enbeaud nature; of things

To come an enjoiner.
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Don't like it.
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Sperm, running by its spine a river, was, flotsam
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What does the picture mean lol, can you verbalise your thoughts?
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Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
Hiya,

I've now managed to move all 4 of your threads together and will move this thread into the creative corner forum now.

Please avoid posting the same thread multiple times on the site as this constitutes spam. :nospam:

Thanks very much,
MR
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What does the picture mean lol, can you verbalise your thoughts?
haha I just didnt expect that wording and topic to be used, I think its just unique
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