Hi everyone, I’m writing my EPQ and I’m 2,400 worlds into my first draft, however I want to change my title. It is “How has diamond mining in South Africa affected the environment and the local population?” My ideas to change it are “ How ethical are diamond mining corporations in South Africa?”. Could I word this better? I still want it to involve the ethical issues and the environmental issues. I want the title to be able to debate it and also come to a conclusion and answer at the end. If you have any advise/ ideas as to how I could word this and make it a better title, it would be greatly appreciated.