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Explain two religious beliefs about the purpose of the family. (5 Marks)

One belief about the purpose of family is that Christians believe it is for procreation. This is where a couple raise up Children in a stable relationship, and help them grow in faith of God. For God commanded to ‘be fruitful and increase in number.’

Another belief about the purpose of family is that Christians believe it is to help education of child. Christians believe it helps Children love one another, because Jesus taught on the importance of loving one another, so Christians believe Children should love and be compassionate too and look up to their father and mother. For Jesus argued in Exodus on the importance of children to ‘love one another’.
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i think u did well, you could reword thethe first point however to make it flow better so the points would be more connected-

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One belief about the purpose of family is that Christians believe it is for procreation. This is because in the Bible, God commanded to mankind to ‘be fruitful and increase in number.’ A family makes sure a couple not only have children, but raise themin a stable relationship and help to grow their in faith of God.

I added a few extra words to make the ideas seem clearer, but what you had originally is still there. The second point looks fine
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