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In terms of science, the below content may not accurate but looking for some advice on how to improve the below writing regarding earthquakes

Earthquake:

It happens undersea and on land when there is a sudden release of energy due to elastic strain or external force

Plate Tectonic Theory:

The earth’s crust is made up of different sizes of plates. Moving plates cause earthquakes and volcanoes

What causes earthquakes:

As the plates continue to move, the edges of two or more plates get stuck together and the plates can gradually store elastic stress. When they are unstuck, the energy is released.

To sum up, the movement of plates causes energy released when they do not fit together
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