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    Well as the title said I'm stuck with my IOP.

    I have everything set out planned but I can't seem to start my story and it's really annoying me.:shifty: I'm writting about a young boy(10 years to 13) and his perspective on wheather killing people under Hitler was 'just a job' and I'm linking it to The Reader.

    Any tips/help/ideas on how to start the first few lines? I'm about to throw the computer accross the room with how frustrated I am any help and I'll rep you.
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    The boy slammed the door shut, with a final smirk at the people trapped inside their tomb. It locked securely. The gaunt inmates hovered inside, awaiting a shower. The smell of death had affected the boy at first, but now, he was immune. He undid the valve to release 200g of one of the most lethal poisons ever created, which would shower the inmates with death. Then, he had a cigarette.
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    (Original post by fisherman)
    The boy slammed the door shut, with a final smirk at the people trapped inside their tomb. It locked securely. The gaunt inmates hovered inside, awaiting a shower. The smell of death had affected the boy at first, but now, he was immune. He undid the valve to release 200g of one of the most lethal poisons ever created, which would shower the inmates with death. Then, he had a cigarette.

    thanxs that gave me a great idea :jumphug:

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