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Makavelli_07
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(Original post by habosh)
I wish all people were so enthusiasm about repping someone like you
Cheers man. The poem was quality - deserved to be repped. Unfortunatly i don't have enough posts etc. to do it, so i guess s/he'll have to wait.

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If you want a poem try this one:

Fair maiden

Your beauty fills me such rapture,
My soul sings joyous hymns when you are near.
My being praises your perfect form
Instead of lamenting it's own existence.

Gladly a slave to you I will become,
Simply to be in the presence of your glory,
serve your every desire for but a glimpse,
Just one glimpse of your enchanting eyes.

Intoxicated by your aura I quickly become,
drunk on the air that you breathe.
high whenever you utter sweet words,
lulled to sleep by your soft song.



Tis called fair maiden but could work for both sexes.
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(Original post by wiwarin_mir)
If you want a poem try this one:

Fair maiden

Your beauty fills me such rapture,
My soul sings joyous hymns when you are near.
My being praises your perfect form
Instead of lamenting it's own existence.

Gladly a slave to you I will become,
Simply to be in the presence of your glory,
serve your every desire for but a glimpse,
Just one glimpse of your enchanting eyes.

Intoxicated by your aura I quickly become,
drunk on the air that you breathe.
high whenever you utter sweet words,
lulled to sleep by your soft song.



Tis called fair maiden but could work for both sexes.

awww thats sweet, lovely poem. Thanks hun.
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