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what to get my boyf? i have no idea! we arent sleeping together and have been seeing each other for 4 months.

also, guys i found this poem is so beautiful anfd romantic give it to your ladies




Valentine


Not a red rose or a satin heart.

I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful undressing of love.

Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.

I am trying to be truthful.

Not a cute card or kissogram.

I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.

Take it.
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring,
if you like.
Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.
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Most people did that poem for GCSE English. I know I did.
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A cows heart
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Most people did that poem for GCSE English. I know I did.
i didnt, but it was in my anthology and i think its so so beautiful.

but anyway. what are u getting ur boyf?i need some ideassssssss pleeeessss
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i didnt, but it was in my anthology and i think its so so beautiful.

but anyway. what are u getting ur boyf?i need some ideassssssss pleeeessss
Some sort of jewelley?

Something that will make him remember you by?
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Some sort of jewelley?

Something that will make him remember you by?
he would remember a cows heart..........
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I don't know what to get my boyfriend either. Hmmm...
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(Original post by elpollodiablouk)
Most people did that poem for GCSE English. I know I did.
Lol yeah I remember it, Carol ann duffy I believe.
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I don't know what to get my boyfriend either. Hmmm...
treat him to a meal n after
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he would remember a cows heart..........
Indeed he would.

Imagine being given a cows heart on Valentines though!
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Indeed he would.

Imagine being given a cows heart on Valentines though!
go for it!

it will be a presant he will never forget
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we arent sleeping together
Why is that relevant? Or is that peoples idea of a 'present'? :p:

But anyway, back on topic, Ive no idea what to get my boyf either. I really dont like valentines day
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go for it!

it will be a presant he will never forget
shove your cows heart up your ..happy anal valentines day you bloodthirsty sick freak
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(Original post by VixenIW)
Why is that relevant? Or is that peoples idea of a 'present'? :p:

But anyway, back on topic, Ive no idea what to get my boyf either. I really dont like valentines day
i didnt think it was that relavent but usually when i ask ppl what i should get my bf, they refer to 'a good romping' etc, and it also ruled out kinky gifts.

i donooooo wwwaaaaattt toooo geeeeettttee
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i didnt think it was that relavent but usually when i ask ppl what i should get my bf, they refer to 'a good romping' etc, and it also ruled out kinky gifts.

i donooooo wwwaaaaattt toooo geeeeettttee
Well, what sort of things is he into?
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i didnt think it was that relavent but usually when i ask ppl what i should get my bf, they refer to 'a good romping' etc, and it also ruled out kinky gifts.

i donooooo wwwaaaaattt toooo geeeeettttee
Aaaah ok

Meeeeeee neeeeiiitttheeerrrr I have no ideas whatsoever
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It would be a lot beter if you wrote something yourself, such as this:

Beast

All those times I looked in the mirror
and saw nothing but a beast,
Such a repulsive face that could only draw pity.
All those times they called me unsightly
Broke my spirit completely.

Long years had a yearned for acceptance
but none was to be found in this cruel limbo.
All hope had fled from me,
instead self-loathing racked my being.

but hear! a voice in the distance,
an angel calling my name.
I followed the sweet melody,
stumbling blind under it's spell.

At last the darkness was lifted,
and before me stood a goddess of darkness.
Gently she kissed me,
filling my body with such sweet ecstacy.

ecstacy was soon consumed by doubt,
"I beg you my lady, play not a trick on this beast" I sobbed.
Her etheral voice once again captivated me,
"You are no beast."
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Well, what sort of things is he into?
thats it... i dono!
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shove your cows heart up your ..happy anal valentines day you bloodthirsty sick freak
You got somthing against freaks? :secruity:
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It would be a lot beter if you wrote something yourself, such as this:

Beast

All those times I looked in the mirror
and saw nothing but a beast,
Such a repulsive face that could only draw pity.
All those times they called me unsightly
Broke my spirit completely.

Long years had a yearned for acceptance
but none was to be found in this cruel limbo.
All hope had fled from me,
instead self-loathing racked my being.

but hear! a voice in the distance,
an angel calling my name.
I followed the sweet melody,
stumbling blind under it's spell.

At last the darkness was lifted,
and before me stood a goddess of darkness.
Gently she kissed me,
filling my body with such sweet ecstacy.

ecstacy was soon consumed by doubt,
"I beg you my lady, play not a trick on this beast" I sobbed.
Her etheral voice once again captivated me,
"You are no beast."
wow! did you write that????? :eek: *looks amazed*
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