Hiya, I wouldn’t worry about it sounding like a sob story as that is kind of the point. If you are struggling with mental health issues, then this is perfectly valid - no need to feel apologetic about it (although this is pretty classic!). You do want it to be factual and genuine though, obviously, in which case the circumstances should be clear, so waffle is not needed. If you want to message me, I’d happy to have a read over what you have written and help if I can. My daughter has received confirmation of her eligibility for A2L - just needs an offer now! 🙉🤞🙏