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Advice for essays

Hi everyone, I'm currently a University student and I need some help. I'm currently not doing that well on my assignments in the second year as im stuck getting 58-60/100 on my tests. I want to improve but my feedback is super vague. They say my sentence structure is weak and I don't know how to improve it. Does anyone have advice? It would be extremely helpful.

Also, one teacher told me my analysis was immature - is there a way I can make my analysis more mature?

Any help would be amazing :smile:

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