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jonnytheman2005
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Would anyone be willing to post a good standard Coursework piece for me to see how they structured their essay and used sources?

Mine was hilariously badly structured.
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grace1
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well no cos you could jus use it! we are not that thick!
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if you told us your topic we could give some pointers on how to structure it and we could give sentence starters and paragraph starters. is it like a historical debate or what?
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Well he better be quick, the coursework has to be at OCR by the 15th May. Mine's been sent off today........................... ...............I hope it has anyway.
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grace1
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yeah some people in my class haven't even started. i did mine on Puritanism in Elizabethan England. It was rubbish. lol
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Bloody hell, i worked on mine constantly for about week tweaking almost everything 20 times.

In the end it was 2,999 words. lol.
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Look at an exemplar.
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grace1
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mine was just over 3,000...but it was structured so badly. in the end i got so stressed over it i stopped...
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Mine was bang on the word limit of 2250, and the teachers given me 48/50 for it, but that could go either up or down.

That wasn't using sources. Only my part A was, and I got 10/10 for that. Again, it might change.

What's your essay title, then I might be able to help with the structure.
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my teacher didn't even help! he said he couln't mark a first draft cos it's against the rules! it is, but most teachers most first drafts anyway? is this the case for everyone?
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rnt u kinda late???
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anyone leaving it this late is kinda dumb (sorry)
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at my school, we didnt start the cwrk until late feb/march because we do it after we hve finished our courses nd done jan. exams and can spend all our efforts on cwrk. so sometimes its not the indivudals fault. i spent 2 months researchin my cwrk and bout 2 1/2 weeks redoing it. The OCR cwrk is different to the other exam boards because it is externally marked so teachers are only allowed to give you verbal advice and not allowed to mark it or grade it....its a bit of a ***** actually!!!
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OCR is a ***** for coursework yes!
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