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No it wasn't. And it was original :|. Self esteem. Shattered
Don't worry about it - most of them have ignored my cod masterpiece too. :secruity:
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Come on, is this all the entries I am going to get?
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Inside Picture...

I sold myself a picture-perfect
Portrait of your Soul
Hung it on my inner wall
You held me in your thrall
Your words were none to speak of
And your mind was hardly there
Sweet nothings so substantial
Lest the truth be all laid bare

And so I loved between your lines
And so you lived inside my mind
And so I never drew the line
Until...

Convictions hazy like the Moon
Refracted through a mist
The Sun was nowhere to be seen
The truth did not exist
Your mute visage spoke volumes
Of a noise behind closed doors
I suffered the deficit of the doubt
But the benefit was yours

And so you hid behind your lines
And so I lived inside my mind
And so I never drew the line
Until...

Between your lines
And in my mind
I find
We are
Unkind

Outside these lines
And on your mind
Sweet nothing’s
All I find

Throughout my mind
Between your lines
My plans are
Undermined

And to my mind
I’ve come to find
I am
No longer
Blind.
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(Original post by Trousers)
Is either of you a cod?
That depends. Do you navigate by sense of smell alone?
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That depends. Do you navigate by sense of smell alone?
Not that I am aware of.
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That depends. Do you navigate by sense of smell alone?
Or have scales, for that matter :eek:
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Not very good at this but here goes;


Despair In Pale Ruin, Deeper

Angry silence,
Screams through the room.
Like a sharp blade of immovable doom.
Whimsical sight to see,
Them all staring at me,
Through the smoldering heat rise,
A perplexing face,
Some unwelcome lies.
They ring,
yet no answer is made.
They sing,
Yet the chorus it fades.
Fades into the background,
To be sung once more.
the one I desire,
And the one I admire,
Not shown in this song,
Yet sung in the one,
Which is tainted with lies,
Spoiled by the ghost,
Who was long since passed,
Into the realm of mysterious times,
a box filled with terrible rhymes.

Read the rest of them here
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my poem is called river

river run
run river run
run runny river
river run run
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my poem is called river

river run
run river run
run runny river
river run run
Lol, classic :p:
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Emotional Fairground.

On my rollercoaster of echoes,
‘Don’t look down’ turns and turns,
But as I glimpse the afternoon sky,
I see my cloud is further away.

I know better than to reach out,
My hand meets only cool reflection,
And as my handprint disappears,
I wonder who you are.

Shut your eyes, cover your ears, bite your tongue,
Hold on tight.
Don’t let me go.

In my house of mirrors you kissed me,
A reflection of ‘don’t lower your chin,’
But if I raise my tear-filled sockets,
I see the stars coming closer.

In the haunting of a ghost train,
I'm caught up in your track,
A relentless darkness,
And my soundless, soundless scream.

Open your eyes, uncover your ears, speak your mind,
Loosen your grip.
And let me go.
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my limerick:

there was a silly a man called ug
who mistook his nose for a plug
suddenly one day
he fell in some hay
and got to work late, got fired, and couldn't support his family anymore.
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That depends. Do you navigate by sense of smell alone?
If so: then, yes, they probably are, to all intents and purposes, cod.
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If so: then, yes, they probably are, to all intents and purposes, cod.
I am the Cod of asphalt to some people.
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Emotional Fairground.
Oh, goody: actual talent.
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Oh, goody: actual talent.
????
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I am the Cod of asphalt to some people.
That must pose an intriguing (not to mention, life-threatening) dilemma.

But I digress.
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????
I approve :rolleyes:
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Oh, goody: actual talent.
Are you saying that none of the others poems that were entered showed talent?
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But mine did... Don't forget that...

Thanks Profesh
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I have no talent
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